ethanblair's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Friday Night Funkin PS2 Commerical]

When The Commercial Is Ten Bajillion Times Better Then The Game

[These Pancakes Are Tiny]

This Was Excellent The Only Thing That I Felt Was Off Is When The Two Were Argueing Over Pancakes His Elbow Was Touching The Pancakes I Think It Adds To The Humor Personally Speaking Pretty Interesting I Also Wish It Was A Bit More Funny The Humor Was There Yet Did Not Really Connect With Me Despite This Five Stars

[eye judge]

The Guy On The Left Has Better Eyes This Was A Decent Animateion

[DO NOT WATCH]

Yeah This Video Is Pretty Cursed It Does Not Really Grab My Attention Though The Animateion Is Pretty Good Its A Fair Animateion Though I Feel Like Its Missing Something I Do Not Know What It Is

SoupPaste responds:

Thank you for the input, I am fairly new to animation. I will have to learn to bring more attention for the next animation I work on!

[Staring At the Floor]

Hehehe That Was Pretty Good Wish There Was More To The Animateion This Time But Still Really Great Stuff

[Sounds in the Heart]

What The Three Stars Are You People Insane That Was Incredible Fluid Animateion And Sweet Vocals The Only Thing Off Was The Character Design A Part From That Its Flawless Why Is This So Low Star Watch This Its Wonder Full

[BURR]

Cute Charming Little Story Wish It Was Poignant In Its Story And Bit Longer Visuals Could Also Use Work Charming Cartoon

[Who Shot Mr. Burns: An Alternate Ending]

Four Stars The Humor Is Pretty Decent And Drags A Bit Though It All Most Got Four And A Half Stars

[Day in the Life of a Costco Worker Pt.5 - Million Dollars]

At First I Was Like Why Is The Employee Being Such An Asshole Then By The End I Was Like Oh

[Story Arc Chapter 1: First Job]

It Was Ehhhh Mediocre The Backgrounds Are Empty And Lack Details Beyond A Few Trees The Effects Are Boreing And Uninteresting Voices Are Okay The Animateion Lacks Personality Like Visual Effects Theres Also Not Any Risky Jokes As A Result The Humor And Enjoyability Deminishes The Story Is Uninteresting There Were Plot Inconsistencys Like How Did One Character Get A Gun We Never Saw Him Pick It Up Why Did He Not Use It In The Store The Story Goes Over The Top But Does Not Take Advantage Of It Like We Have A Guy Who Tries To Rob The Store Then Out Of Nowhere He Grows Giant Why Not Have Him Do Something Silly Like Do A Number Two But Not Show The Gross Material Or Have Him Pass Wind Or The Job Why Not Have Some Interesting Character Developement Like Personal Things About The Character We Just Get He Wants To Be A Illistrateor Though Its Not Much Graphics And Effects Are Low Quality Add Funny Effects That Not Only Impress You But Friends Sorry If You Have No Friends You Know Paceing Is Key The Story Moves At A Slow Pace By Repeating A Gag Until Its Funny Thats Not Comedy Best Advice Increase Visual Aesthetics Build Character Developement To Enjoyable Characters Add Some Risky And Experimental Humor In The Mix And It Might Be Pretty High Tier I Can Not In Good Conscience Rate This Higher That Would Destroy All Creditability